Wednesday, February 15, 2012

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It was one of many sites where Sir Francis Drake, on his journey round the world, might have landed.

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It was one of many California sites where Sir Francis Drake, on his journey round the world, was thought to have landed.

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The beach was one of many coastal California sites where the English pirate and royal protege, Sir Francis Drake, might have stopped on his journey round the world.

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The fog-wrapped beach was one of many coastal California sites where the English pirate and royal protege, Sir Francis Drake, may have stopped during his circumnavigation of the earth.


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The windy, fog-wrapped beach was one of many coastal California sites where England's celebrated and intrepid pirate, Sir Francis Drake, may have stopped during his two-year pillaging expedition round the world.

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The tiny, isolated fog-bound cove was just one of many California sites where England's celebrated and intrepid pirate, Sir Francis Drake, may have stopped during his wildly successful two-year pillaging and exploratory voyage which circumnavigated the globe.

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The small, fog-blanketed cove, surrounded by sandstone cliffs, was one of many...AGHH!!!!!



12 comments:

  1. ha ha ha No more RE-Dos for YOU! Now go relax! Thanks for the giggle. ♥

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    1. Thanks! I think it's what's called over-editing. I'm trying to bresk myself of the habit.

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    1. Thanks! Unfortunately it's only a slightly exaggerated example of my obsession with over-editing.

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    1. Thanks! I hope I'm not the only one who indulges in obsessive editing.

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  4. My head is spinning! That was fun, so thanks for sharing *grin*

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  5. :D Very clever!

    Kathy
    http://gigglingtruckerswife.blogspot.com/

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